Critique please, it called Black Water?
Question by chevyloo487: Critique please, it called Black Water?
So this is sort of old news but this is about the company formerly called BlackWater. Now called Xe, they are a private military company who hires retired special forces member and pays them alot of money to do what they’re told. In the song I reference the baghdad shootings, were 17 were killed, including a 9 year old. 20 more were injured because some guy was on the wrong side of the road and didn’t get out of the way fast enough so the blackwater troops opened fire and killed alot of people. The department of defense suspended blackwater operations and investigated and confirmed said story but couldn’t do anything cause the incident was in Iraq not the U.S. Blackwater operations were resumed three days after the incident. They also wrote jesus killed muhhamad on a wall yelled it through a megaphone and shot anyone who came outside their door. there are also allegations they provided weapons to a terrorist group, and yeah they’re still in operation and their contracts are still being renewed with the department of defense. I also mention all the religous who blah blah because the founder of blackwater said something along the lines of my goal is to spread christianity through out the world and destroy islam.
I have the flow all figured out and mapped onto the music so the rhythms fine so if you could critique the content it self it would be much appreciated
Christrian Crusaders
destroying islamic faith
Make them convert
or meet a painful fate
Jesus killed Muhammad
Spray painted on the wall
Then they scream
When the bullet casings fall
Im hiding
In Blackwater
Only surface
for the slaughter
Come join me martyrs
Come join the fight
I’ll protect you
With money and your christ
You call yourself
A private military
Lets stop the bullshit
Just a bunch of Mercenaries
Killing seventeen
Wound another twenty
Including a nine year old
Just a sample of the many
Massacres
that you planned So well
With a great big smile
I”ll see you all in hell
Im hiding
In Blackwater
Only surface
for the slaughter
Come join me martyrs
Come join the fight
I’ll protect you
With money and your christ
Best answer:
Answer by Skylar
Good lyrics. It makes one want to find out more about what really happened.
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